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  谢谢帮我检查一下作文《NewYear`sResolution》NewYear`sResolution2007isover,and2008iscoming.Ofcourse,I`mgoingtomakesomeNewYear`sResotutions.Inthenewyear,I`mgoingtostudyharderandharder.FirstI`mgoingtotrytostudy

  谢谢帮我检查一下作文《NewYear`sResolution》

  NewYear`sResolution

  2007isover,and2008iscoming.Ofcourse,I`mgoingtomakesomeNewYear`sResotutions.Inthenewyear,I`mgoingtostudyharderandharder.FirstI`mgoingtotrytostudysciencebetter.BecauseIthinkmyscienceachievementisveryterrible.Ihaveworkharder.AndI`mgoingtodoexercisemoretokeepfitandtobetaller.NowI`mstartplayingtennis.Iwanttoplayitwell.FinallyIhopeourlifebecomesmoreandmorehappy..Iwilllearnwritingwithmylefthandduringthenextyear

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  倒数第二句和倒数第一句换一下位置,倒数第二句是总结的句子.Finally就不要动了,改为“FinallyIwilllearnwritingwithmylefthandduringthenextyear.Ihopeourlivesbecomesmoreandmorehappily.”.-...

2020-04-07 23:57:18
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