ApersonthatIadmireismydad.

　　Hehasoneofthebestpersonalitiesever.Heiskindandveryunderstanding.Hetreatsmelikeanadult.Heisfunnyandhasalotofcharisma.Hehasaninvitingsmileandalaughtodiefor.HiseyesarethemostbeautifulandwhentheylightupitmakesmereallyhappywhereIcan’thelpbutsmile.Hecanbedefensive,butheisalwaysprotective.Heisarisk-taker,anditmakeshimfun,eventhoughsomeoftherisksarenotworththepossibleconsequences.Histasteinmusicisverysimilartomine.Heisagoodfriendandisalwaysthereforanyandeveryoneintimesofneed.

　　IlovemydadsomuchandIconstantlythinkofhimandwishthebest.Hemaynothavethebestjoborthemostmoney,buttomethatdoesn’tmatteronebit.Itisaboutwhoheisandhowgreathissoulis.MydadisoneofthegreatestpersonsIknowandthatiswhyheismyhero.

　　这是一篇国外小朋友写的一段话,我稍做了editing拿来给你做参考,