【帮我看看这篇英语有哪些地方语法或者词汇使用错误IalwaysneededtimeonmyownIneverthoughtI'dneedyoutherewhenIcryAndthedaysfeellikeyearswhenI'maloneWhenyouwalkawayIcountthestepsthatyoutakeDoyouse】

　　帮我看看这篇英语有哪些地方语法或者词汇使用错误

　　Ialwaysneededtimeonmyown

　　IneverthoughtI'dneedyoutherewhenIcry

　　AndthedaysfeellikeyearswhenI'malone

　　WhenyouwalkawayIcountthestepsthatyoutake

　　DoyouseehowmuchIneedyourightnow?

　　Whenyou'regone

　　Thepiecesofmyheartaremissingyou

　　Whenyou'regone

　　ThefaceIcametoknowismissingtoo

　　Whenyou'regone

　　AllthewordsIneedtoheartoalwaysgetmethroughtheday

　　AndmakeitOK

　　Imissyou.