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　　y英语语法修改Peoplewouldliketodosomeshoppinginthecity,fortherearemanygoodsforthemtochoose;parentswanttosendtheirchildreninthecity,fortheeducationalfacilitiesinthecityaremoreadvanced;workershopetoworkinth

　　y英语语法修改

　　Peoplewouldliketodosomeshoppinginthecity,fortherearemanygoodsforthemtochoose;parentswanttosendtheirchildreninthecity,fortheeducationalfacilitiesinthecityaremoreadvanced;workershopetoworkinthecity,fortheyhavemoreopportunitiesandcanearnmoremoney.thetrafficincitiesismoreconvenient.Youcangosomewherebyplane、subway、busortaxi.Yetpeoplestillgothecountrysidetoenjoytherurallifeiftheyhavetimetoenjoythefreshair.

　　看看有没有语病,改的检点容易一点.

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2020-04-0110:10

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胡华浪

　　city前最好不加the.somewhere改成anywhere.go（to）thecountryside

2020-04-01 10:12:42

牛秦洲

　　最好把改过的全文都发一下。。。。

2020-04-01 10:17:30

胡华浪

　　Peoplewouldliketodosomeshoppingincities,fortherearemanygoodsforthemtochoose;parentswanttosendtheirchildrentocities,fortheeducationalfacilitiesinitiesaremoreadvanced;workershopetoworkincities,becausetheyhavemoreopportunitiesandtheycanearnmoremoney.thetrafficincitiesismoreconvenient.Youcangoanywherebyplane、subway、busortaxi.Yetpeoplestillgotothecountrysidetoenjoytherurallifeiftheyhavetimetoenjoythefreshair。

2020-04-01 10:19:25

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