【写了篇英语作文.请人看看有没有错误.HobbiesDoyouhaveahobby?Whatdoyoudoinyourfreetime?Ithinkhobbiesareveryimportantforus,becausewehavemanytimeforourhobbieseveryafternoon.AndtodayIwanttotellyousomethinga】

　　写了篇英语作文.请人看看有没有错误.

　　Hobbies

　　Doyouhaveahobby?Whatdoyoudoinyourfreetime?Ithinkhobbiesareveryimportantforus,becausewehavemanytimeforourhobbieseveryafternoon.AndtodayIwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyhobbies.

　　Ilikeswimmingandplayingbasketball,theyarebothsport,becauseIthinkdosportcanmakememorehealthandmoreactive.Ioftenplaybasketballwithmyyoungbrotherintheafternoonat5:00.Heistwoyearsyoungerthanme,butheismuchtallerthanme,soIcannotshootfacetoface,Ihavetocrossoverhimtomakeabetterchance.ButIcannotcrossoverhimeverytime,solikeyouimagine,itisveryinteresting.

　　Weplaybasketballforanhour,andthenmyfatherpicksupusandwegotoswimpool.Mybrotherplaywithotherpeopleinthechildpool.AndIswimwithmymind,althoughIamverytiredafterplayingbasketball.

　　Ilikereadingtoo,butlonlyreadintheeveningoratnight.BecauseIdonotlikereadinthesun.

　　Mylifeiscolourful,interesting,exciting,andIwanttolearntennis,sinceIhavesawatennisgamefromRogerFederer.