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请帮我英语批改作文Everyonehashobby.Everyon~shobbydoesn~tdifferent.Ihaveahobby,too.myhobbyiscollectingoldcoins.ithinkcollectoldcoinsitisveryinteresting.ihavebeencollectingoldcoinsthreeandahalfyears.nowihave
请帮我英语批改作文
Everyonehashobby.Everyon~shobbydoesn~tdifferent.Ihaveahobby,too.myhobbyiscollectingoldcoins.ithinkcollectoldcoinsitisveryinteresting.ihavebeencollectingoldcoinsthreeandahalfyears.nowihave200ofthem.collectingoldcoinsmakemeveryhappy.iwouldliketostartanoldcoins~club.
