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　　英语检查一句话,Nowadays,Someparentssaythatchildren’sfreetimeactivitiesshouldbeeducationalotherssayweshouldnotgivethechildrentoomuchpressure.AsIseeitthatIpartlyagreewiththeopinionsexpressedabove.请问标点

　　英语检查一句话,

　　Nowadays,Someparentssaythatchildren’sfreetimeactivitiesshouldbeeducationalotherssayweshouldnotgivethechildrentoomuchpressure.AsIseeitthatIpartlyagreewiththeopinionsexpressedabove.

　　请问标点还有复数形式,句式,有什么错吗?

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2020-03-2820:27

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黄新刚

　　恕我直言,很中式英语,也有很多语法问题

　　Nowadayssomeparentsholdthatchildrenshouldnothavetheirsparetimeexceptstudyingwhileothersinsistweshouldnotexerttoomuchpressureuponthechildren.说不是一定都得用say的,hold持有观点,insist坚持,while然而,连词连接两个句子成为一个并列句,给太多压力施加用exertupon较好

　　第2句话你部分同意谁的观点?而且也不是这样表达的,是不是说都有一定道理,但都不完全对?AsfarasI'mconcerned,在我看来,theseviewsarenotcompletelyvalidandIcanonlyagreepartially.