修改英语文章,初二水平.嗯,就帮忙看看有木有语法错误,最好说一下我错哪了.谢谢大家.对也....我真是太迷糊了..对不起...ThedisadvantageofcomputersAtthemoment，moreandmorestudents

　　修改英语文章,初二水平.

　　嗯,就帮忙看看有木有语法错误,最好说一下我错哪了.

　　谢谢大家.

　　对也....我真是太迷糊了..对不起...

　　Thedisadvantageofcomputers

　　Atthemoment，moreandmorestudentsarekeenonsurfingtheInternet,that’sbadfortheyhealth.

　　Infacts,someinformationcanprovesurfingtheInternetisharmful.Forexample,there’sagameverywell-knowninarecent,just‘stealvegetables’.Thisgameleadssomestudentsgetupin3amtosurfingtheInternet.Theycheckthee-mailseverydaymanytimesandspentalotoftimetotalkwithnetfriendsthatforgettime.

　　Forthesereasons,theyloseinterestinstudy,andthehealthworseandworse.

　　Ithinktheyaresostupid.Theydon’tknowtheimportancetosleep?Theyaremakingjoketolife!

　　Teenager,weshouldprotectourlife，treasuretime.so,awaytheInternettemptation!