一个初一英语作文题MysummervacationIhaveaveryinterestingsummervacationthisyear.Ispentmysummervacationwithmyfamily.Wewenttopark.It'ssobeautifulandgreen.Thereweremanytreesandflowers.Therepeoplewereveryfinendiy.P

　　一个初一英语作文题

　　Mysummervacation

　　Ihaveaveryinterestingsummervacationthisyear.Ispentmysummervacationwithmyfamily.

　　Wewenttopark.It'ssobeautifulandgreen.Thereweremanytreesandflowers.Therepeoplewereveryfinendiy.Peopleweresinginganddancinginthepark.someweretakingphotos.Otherswereplayinggames.Wehadgreatfunplayinginthepark.

　　Next,wewentshopping.thesupermarketwastoocranded.butthegoodsweregreatandcheap.soweboughtsomegoods.wefeltprettyhappy.

　　Thisismysummervacation,ajoyfulandshortvacation.Ilikeitverymuch.

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