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  求帮忙改英语短文Tomisalittleboy,andheisonlysevenyearsold.Oncehegoestoacinema.Itisthefirsttimeforhimtodothat.Hebuysaticketandgoesin.Butaftertwoorthreeminuteshecomesout,andbuysthesecondticketandgoesi

  求帮忙改英语短文

  Tomisalittleboy,andheisonlysevenyearsold.Oncehegoestoacinema.Itisthefirsttimeforhimtodothat.Hebuysaticketandgoesin.Butaftertwoorthreeminuteshecomesout,andbuysthesecondticketandgoesinagain.Afterafewminuteshecomesoutagainandbuysthethirdticket.Twoorthreeminutesafterthathecomesoutandasksforanotherticket.Butagirlaskshim,“Whydoyoubuysomanytickets?Howmanyfriendsdoyoumeet?”“No,Ihavenofriendshere,butabigwomanalwaysstopsmeatthedoorandcutsupmyticket.”

  这篇文章都用过去式后中间几句有些重复,

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2020-03-2301:11
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李宝绶

  修改建议1、第一句Tomisalittleboy,andheisonlysevenyearsold用来介绍Tom的个人情况,可以用现在时态.如果把整个段落都看做是一个故事,这一句也可以用过去时叙述.2、后面讲的是他过去的经历,需...

2020-03-23 01:14:17
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