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  建议把难度稍微提高一下,意思相同的次可以替换,修改句子结构而不改变句意,并加一个结尾:Hello,ladiesandgentlemen.MynameisElijah.Iama13-year-oldgentleboy,becausemyclassmatesalwayssay"Oh,youarereallyg

  建议把难度稍微提高一下,意思相同的次可以替换,修改句子结构而不改变句意,并加一个结尾:

  Hello,ladiesandgentlemen.MynameisElijah.Iama13-year-oldgentleboy,becausemyclassmatesalwayssay"Oh,youarereallygentle."Butinfacttheysay"Oh,Icannotbearyou,youaresoboring!"AndIdonotknowwhy.SotodayIwilltalkaboutmycharacter.

  Iamsweet-temperedmostofthetime,forexample,ifyoulendyourclassmatesapen.Thenheorshebrokeit.Maybeyouwilllethimorherbuyanewoneorgiveyouthemoney.ButIwillnotdothat.UsuallyIwillforgivehimorher.AlthoughIcanbearthiskindofthings,Ineverforgivesomeonewhosebrokethemostimportantthingsofmine.

  SometimesIamhumorous.Aboutthreemouthsago,ItoldmyfriendsomethingcrazyaboutEquivalentsubstitution“ThecustomerisGod,Godisagirl,sothecustomerisagirl.”AfterItoldhim,helaughedallday.Andbytheway,mymathisreallynice.

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2020-03-2301:05
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陈穗祯

  大致改了下,楼主看是否合用,说实话原文还是差了一些.Hi,ladiesandgentlemen,mynameisElijah.Iama13-year-old'gentleman'becausemyclassmatesalwaysregardmeas"areallygentleman".However,I...

2020-03-23 01:06:21
范同顺

  很好,但是可以再把数学那一段用一句话带过吗

2020-03-23 01:10:37
陈穗祯

  OK,那就把Lastbutnotleast那一段遇上一段合并,即去掉该段,从isn'tit?后面直接接:Bytheway,Idoquitegoodinmathandclassmatesareverywelcomedtocometomewhenproblemsrelatingtomathsoccur.

2020-03-23 01:11:56
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