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　　【求改一下这篇英语短文.Lastsummerholiday,Itakeavacationwithmyparents.Wewenttothenaturalparkandsawmanykindsofanimalsinthepark.Therearetigers,monkeys,pandas,lionsandbears.Buttherearealotofgarbage,sotheyseemsn】

　　求改一下这篇英语短文.

　　Lastsummerholiday,Itakeavacationwithmyparents.Wewenttothenaturalparkandsawmanykindsofanimalsinthepark.Therearetigers,monkeys,pandas,lionsandbears.Buttherearealotofgarbage,sotheyseemsnothappy.Theirlifeinthenaturalpark,peopleshouldnotdestroytheirhome.Iwillneverforgetthetirptothenaturalpark.

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2020-03-2301:01

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　　Lastsummerholiday,itoke(此为讲述上个暑假的事,时态应统一为过去时)avacationtonaturalparkwithmyparents.Wehaveseenmanykindsofanimals.Suchastiger,monkey,panda,lionandbear.Butthereweresomanygarbageintheparkthatthoseanimalsseemunhappy.Theyliveinthenaturalpark,we,peopleshouldnotdestroytheirhome.Allinall,i'llneverforgetthetrip.