两篇都差不多了,都是介绍我的房间的,你可以在这基础上做些修改,增加作文的真实性.

　　Thisismyroom.Myroomisnice!Thequiltisonthebed.Thephotoisonthewall.Thebackpackisunderthetable.Thepencilisinthepencilcase.Theeraser、rulerandpenareinthepencilcase.Thepencilcaseinthebackpack.Thekeysareinthedrawer.Thehatisonthechair.Thebooksareonthebookcase.TheCDsareonthebookcase.Thebaseballisunderthebed.Thealarmclockisonthedresser.Ilovemyroom!

　　Myroomisverybeautiful.Iloveitverymuch.

　　Thereisabigbedbesidemywindow.Andthereisabeautiulsheetonit.Itisgivenbymymother.Shegaveittomeformybirthday.Andneartothewindow,thereisaveranda.Icanseealotofwonderfulsightsfromit.AndIhaveasmallwardrobe.Allmyclothesarehunginit.

　　Inaword,myroomisthemostwonderfulroomintheworld!