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　　初二英语作文批改MynameisLiMing.Myhobbyiscollectingandmakingkites.Ithinkit'sberyinteresting.Ihavemorethan100kitesnow.Icollectandmakekitesattheageof9.Ihavesomedifferentkindsofkiteswithdifferentcolours.The

　　初二英语作文批改

　　MynameisLiMing.Myhobbyiscollectingandmakingkites.Ithinkit'sberyinteresting.Ihavemorethan100kitesnow.Icollectandmakekitesattheageof9.Ihavesomedifferentkindsofkiteswithdifferentcolours.Thebiggestkiteis6metresandthesmallestoneisasbigasabook.Ithinkhobbiesisveryimportantforus,becauseitcanmakeyougrowasaperson,developyourinterestsandhelpyoulearnnewskills.麻烦看看有没有语法或是用词等错误,如有的话,请一一列举,帮忙改正!O(∩_∩)O谢谢

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　　MynameisLiMing.Myhobbyiscollectingandmakingkites(像两个HOBBY啊).Ithinkit'sbery(very吧?打错了)interesting.Ihavemorethan100kitesnow.Icollectandmakekitesattheageof9(九岁用不...