Children'sDay,ourday

　　Children'sDayisonthefirstofJune.Itisourholiday.Wealllikeitverymuch.Wedon'thaveschoolonChildren'sDay.Wehavelesshomework,sowecandoalotofthings.OnChildren'sday.Weusuallyhaveabigparty.Wecansinganddanceattheparty.Wealsoeatalotoffruitsanddrinkalotofjuice.Sometimeswegotothepark.Boysoftenflykitesthere.Girlslikegoingrowinginthelake.LastChildren'sDay,wesawafunnycartooninthecinema.Wealllikeditverymuch.Children'sDayiscomingsoon.IhopeIwillhaveagoodday.

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