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　　Lastyear,afterwegurtuatedformjuniorhighschool.WeorganizedajourneytoFenghuang.

　　Phoenixisanoldtownwhichsurroundedbymountainsandriver,It's

　　famousforthenightinthetown.whendarkcomes,withallthelightlighted,alotsofpeoplewalkedonthe

　　road,thebaropened,theoldtownfalledintohappiness.

　　Notonlythebeautifulviewattractme,butalsoIenjoythetimeweplay

　　together.wewereshoppingandvisiting

　　thetowninday.Singinganddrinkinginthebaratnight.Moreover,weplay

　　majiangandporkuntilnextmorning.

　　Thisisanunforgetablejourney.IbelievethatIwon'tletitdisappearedinmymemory