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　　【请专业老师帮改英语作文,大一水平,正文如下,题目要求达标,只批改正文.AnUnforgettableLessonShewasnotmyclosefriend.Butsincethen,webecomethebestfriends.WhenIwasajuniormiddleschoolstudent,amarveloustimeIh】

　　请专业老师帮改英语作文,大一水平,

　　正文如下,题目要求达标,只批改正文.

　　AnUnforgettableLesson

　　Shewasnotmyclosefriend.Butsincethen,webecomethebestfriends.

　　WhenIwasajuniormiddleschoolstudent,amarveloustimeIhaveeverbeen,Igotwellwitheveryoneinmyclass,whichmeanstheyareallequaltome.Oneafternoon,wheneverybodywentbackhomeexceptmeandanothergirl,Lily,Isawshewasrestingatthetable.Withconcerntotheclassmate,Isteppedforwardandaskedherwhatwasthematter."Stomache!"Shecouldhardlysaidawordbuttorest.SoIcarriedherhomebymybikeandsweetlysaidgoodbyetoher.IthinkitwasnotabigdealformeforIthoughtit'smydutytoheipclassmatesespeciallywhenonecouldnotturntoothers.

　　Ontomorrowmorring,Isawherrefrashagainandsentherawarmsmile.ThenasIsitonmydeskIfoundanicewrappedpackagewithapieceofcutecakeinsideit.Suprisedandtouched,Ilookedbackandsaidthanksgratefully.ItwasthefirsttimethatIfeltaboutfriendshipdeeply.

　　Icouldneverforgethowhappythatdayevenifitwasalittlething.

　　Sincethen,Ihavelearntwhatahelppersoncouldbringabout.Notonlythehappiness,butalsoaforeverfriendship.

　　主要看语法和语言上的问题,最好以四级的水平,

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　　我不知道四级是什么水平,我直接就改了!

　　AnUnforgettableLesson

　　Wewereneverclose,butaftertheincident,webecamebestfriends.

　　WhenIwasinmiddleschool,oneofthebestmomentsofmylife,Igotalongwitheveryone,andwasnotbulliedinanyway.Oneafternoon,everyoneleftexceptformeandthisothergirl,Lily,Isawherrestingatthetable.Worriedaboutmyclassmate,Isteppedforwardandaskedifsheisfeelingwell."Stomache!"Wasallshewasabletobluroutbeforegoingbacktorest.SoItookherhomeonmybikeandsweetlysaidgoodbyetoher.IthoughtitwasnotabigdealformeforIthoughtit'smydutytohelpothers,especiallywhennooneisthereforthem.

　　Thenextday,Isawherrefreshedagainandsentherawarmsmile.ThenasIsatatmydesk,Inoticedanicelywrappedpackagewithapieceofcutecakeinsideit.Surprisedandtouched,Ilookedbackandthankedher.ItwasthefirsttimethatIfeltthatItrulyfeltadeepfriendship.

　　Evenitwasjustalittlegestureofthanks,IcouldneverforgethowhappyIfeltthatday.

　　Sincethen,Ihavelearnedwhathelpingpersoncouldbringabout.Notonlyhappiness,butalsofriendship.

　　***thelastsentence,notonly...butalso,hastobeparallelstructure.Whichbasicallymeansifyouused"the"happiness,youhavetouse"the"friendship.Sincetherewasnoadjectivetodescribehappiness,thenyouneedtotakeoutthe"forever"sinceit'sanadjectivedescribethekindoffriendship.