SAT写作例子1：Success

　　Theme:Success

　　Thesis:Successcanbedisastrous.

　　Subject:TheManhattanProject

　　Detail:

　　AttheendofWWII,despiteJapan’sheavylosses,theleadersinJapanwasreluctanttosurrender.WhenTrumanbecamepresident,hewasinformedoftheU.Sgorvenment’ssecretManhattanProjectwhichhaddesignedanatomicbomb.OnAugust6,1945,theUnitedStatesdroppedanatomicbombonHiroshima,resultinginnearly130,000casualtiesandthelevelingof90%ofthecity.Threedayslater,withnoresponsefromJapan,TrumanauthorizedtheseconddroppingonNagaski,killingandwoundingover75,000people.WhilethispolicysuccessfullyendedthePacificWarwhichmaycauseevengreaterlosses,itwasacatastrophetothelocalpeoplewhosufferedfromthisatomicannihilation.Itsucceededinbringpeacetotheworldatthecostofmillionsofinnocentlives.

　　Examplealsoserves:Greatsuccessrequiresgreatloss.

　　SAT写作例子2：creativity/curiosity

　　Theme:creativity/curiosity

　　Subject:HenryFord

　　Detail:Henryford,oneofthemostinfluentialinventorsinthehistory,wasalwaysinattentiveinschool.Once,heandafriendtookawatchaparttoprobetheprinciplebehindit.Angryandupset,theteacherpunishedhimbothtostayafterschool.theirpunishmentwastostayuntiltheyhadfixedthewatch.buttheteacherdidnotknowyoungford’sgenius,intenminutes,thismechanicalwizardhadrepairedthewatchandwasonthiswayhome.ItisimaginationthatinvigoratedFordtomakeathroughinquiryaboutthingshedidnotknow.Heoncepluggedupthespoutofateapotandplaceditonthefire.thenhewaitedtoseewhatwouldhappen.thewaterboiledand,ofcourse,turnedtosteam.sincethesteamhadnowaytoescape,theteapotexploded.theexplosioncrackedamirrorandbrokeawindow.Ford’syearofcuriosityandtinkeringpaidoff,whenhebuilthisimaginationofhorselesscarriageintoreality,thehistoryoftransportationwaschangedforever.

　　SAT写作例子3：Opinion

　　Theme:Opinion

　　Thesis:Nothingisacceptedbyeveryone.

　　Subject:Darwin'sOriginofSpecies-1859

　　Detail:

　　CharlesDarwinshockedtheworldwithhistheoryofevolutionasproposedinOriginofSpecies.Heexplainedthat,overtime,speciesadapttotheirenvironmentinordertosurviveandthenpassalongtheseacquiredtraitstofuturegenerationsinaprocessknownas"naturalselection."Althoughhisideasarewidelyacceptedtoday,thenotionthatspeciescouldhaveevolvedfromanentirelydifferentspeciescausedoutragefromthosebelievingthatalllivingcreatureswerecreatedbyGod.

　　Thesis:Itisbettertodetermineone’sownviewsofrightandwrongthanfollowthecrowd.

　　Subject:ThomasPanie&SusanB.Anthony

　　Detail:

　　AtthebeginningoftheAmericanRevolution,theAmericancolonieswere,withhesitancyandtroublesomedoubts,movingtowardindependence.Fewpeoplefavoredcompleteindependence,whileorther,firmlybelievedinconservativethoughts,wishedtosendmorepetitionsandappealstotheKing.Atthattime,ThomasPaineappealthecoloniestoseparatethemselvesfromBritainandtomakeAmericaoneplaceinworldwherefreedomandloveofhumankindcouldflourish.Hisfamouspamphlet,CommonSense,wasoutspoken,touche,piercetothetruthwithasinglepertinentrema