Oneafternoonmyfatherand(went)fishingonariverside.Wefoundthewaterwas(so)dirtythatwecouldnotsee(the)bottom.Wesawsomerubbish(and)(dead)fishfloatingonthewater(as)well.Thatafternoon,myfatherandIcaughtonlya(small)fish.WhydidfishintheriverdieThatwasbecause(deletethe"of"here)alotoffactoriesalongtheriveralwayspoured(its)wastewater(deletethe"at"here)andrubbishintotheriver.Inthisway,thewatergot(polluted).Thus,mostofthefishintheriverwaskilled.

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　　真的,这文章太坑人了,哪有这么说话的啊,简直不说人话嘛.给孩子留作业起码弄个正规英文读物啊,这样的东西读多了还怎么学正经英语啊.