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　　帮我改改英语作文,英语很差劲的,看语法什么错误的,有好心人能提供长期修改的请留下邮箱或者什Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrento

　　帮我改改英语作文,英语很差劲的,看语法什么错误的,有好心人能提供长期修改的请留下邮箱或者什

　　Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfolllowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

　　1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切

　　2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该……

　　HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?

　　LetYouChildToFlying

　　Innowdays,preparedtheallthingandmadeadecideforchildrenisoverparents.Theactivitiesbeyondparentsshoulddoresultinchildrenlackofthedecideforthemselves.

　　Inordertomakechildrentobeindependent,parentsshouldtrytolettheyaloneandmuchthinkofwhattheythink.Askwhattheywantandtellchildrentoworkinghardforitinyourguide.

　　Parentsarethespecialteacherinchildlifebutnotthemselves.Everyonehaveabroadskyinlifeandcanflyinginthesky.Independentshouldbeinchildflyingtravel.

　　看来我够失败,

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　　letyourchildfly

　　innowadays,childreniswellpreparedanddeprivedoftheirrighttomakeadicisionoftheirownfuture.theactivitieswaybeyondtheparentsdutycouldresultinchildren'slackofcapabilitytomakedicisionoftheirown,

　　inordertomakechilrentobeindependent,parentsshouldtrytoleavethemaloneandtaketheirchildren'sthoughtmoreseriously.askwhatdotheywantandtellthechildrentoworkhardforitunderyourinstructionandsupervision.

　　parentsarethespecialteacherinchildren'slifeinsteadofthemselves,everyoneareentitledtoabroadskytoflyfreelyintheirlifeandindependenceshouldbethekeyelementinchildren'sflyjourney