【英语自我介绍,帮我提提意见Goodafternoon,teachers!Mynameis***.MyEnglishnameis***.Iam13yearsold.Ilikedrawingpictures,somyfavoritesubjectisart.AndIlikemath,too.Somepeopledon'tlikeit,butIthinkit'sinteresting.Myfa】

　　英语自我介绍,帮我提提意见

　　Goodafternoon,teachers!Mynameis***.MyEnglishnameis***.Iam13yearsold.Ilikedrawingpictures,somyfavoritesubjectisart.AndIlikemath,too.Somepeopledon'tlikeit,butIthinkit'sinteresting.Myfavoriteanimalisdog.becauseIthinktheyareverylovely.Myfavoritecolorisyellowandpink.They'resobeautiful.Myfavoritemovieisactionmovies.It'ssoexciting,butIdon'tlikedocumentary,it'sveryboring.Nowletmetellyouastory.

　　帮我改一改,提提意见,我可是第一次参加这种比赛,心里发慌.

　　帮我看看有没有they're和it's用错的，等等。