帮忙修改一下这篇英语作文要求修改语病尽量把一些简单句改成高级句型字数在110字左右MichaelJackson,borninGary,Indiana,USA,isawell-knownpopstar.Hewashandomeandthin.Hesangsongs,dancedandacted.Oneof

　　帮忙修改一下这篇英语作文要求修改语病尽量把一些简单句改成高级句型字数在110字左右

　　MichaelJackson,borninGary,Indiana,USA,isawell-knownpopstar.Hewashandomeandthin.Hesangsongs,dancedandacted.OneofhisfamoussongisBillieJean.

　　Whenhewas8,hehasshownhisgiftforsinginganddancing.Hisfansareallovertheworld.Theyweremovedbyhisperfectperformances.

　　Heistheprideoftheblackpeople.Hetriedhisbesttofightfortherightsofblackpeopleandhedonatedalotofmoneytothepoorandchildrenwhowereinbadhealth.Hesatagoodexampletous.

　　MichaelJacksonisregardedasthekingofpop.HisdeathmademeVERYsad.ButheisstilltheperfectimageofthemodernpopstarinAmericaandindeedtheworld.