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　　【帮我改篇英语作文,以高考标准,OneThingI'mProudofIcanclearlyrememberathingwhichI'mproudof.AsIrecall,mygradeswasverypoorbeforelong.Myparentsworriedaboutmyfutureandalwaysfoundfaultwithmeduetomypoorgrade】

　　帮我改篇英语作文,以高考标准,

　　OneThingI'mProudof

　　IcanclearlyrememberathingwhichI'mproudof.AsIrecall,mygradeswasverypoorbeforelong.Myparentsworriedaboutmyfutureandalwaysfoundfaultwithmeduetomypoorgrades.Lifeislikeaboxofchocolate,youneverkonwwhatyouaregoingtoget.Gradually,Irealizedtheimportanceofgrades.Also,Iknowthatarosyfuturedependsonhands.Therefore,Idecidedtoconcentrateonmystudyandsticktomydream.ThereisnodenyingthatImakegreatprogresswiththejointeffortsofparentsandteachers.What'smore,Ilearnalotofthingsfrommyexperienceandrealizedit'stimeformetosparemostofmytimetostudy.Tobebrief,Iwillliveuptomyparents'expectationandclingtomydream.

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2020-02-2601:08

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刘青峰

　　IcanclearlyrecalltheaccomplishmentIammostproudofinmylife.Inthepast,mygradeswereextremelypoorandthissaddenednotonlyme,butmyparentsaswell.[Lifeislikeaboxofchocolate,youneverknowwhatyouaregoingtoget.](不太懂这句想表达的.)Astimepassedby,Igraduallycametograspandrealizetheimportanceofgrades.Therefore,Idecidedtoconcentrateonmystudiesandjustgiveitmyall.TheprogressImadewiththejointeffortsofmylovingparentsandsupportiveteacherswasastounding.Fromthenon,lifebecameachallengethatIreadilyandhappilyaccept,filledwithhopeanddetermination.It'ssomethingItacklewithallmymightandlivetothefullest.Thisexperienceandsuccessfulchangewithinmyselfhastaughtmeinnumerouslessonsthatarecrucialtothemeaningoflife.Asaresult,Inowdomybesttoliveuptomyparent'sexpectationsandfulfillmydreams.

　　Didthisreallyfastsopleaseexcuseanytyposifthere'sany.追问ifyagotanyquestions,butIcan'tanswertonightsosorryboutthat.

2020-02-26 01:11:47

陈羿

　　Thankyousomuch,Icanappreciateit.ButIhaveaquestion.Didyoufindanymistakesinmyarticle?Thatsentencejustempressmychangesissudden.Soyouneverknowwhatyouaregoingtoget.

2020-02-26 01:13:03

刘青峰

　　Mistakesinyourparagraph?Well...I'llbehonestwithyou.Therewereseveralmistakesinvocabandgrammar.Youtriedtoelaborateyoursentenceswithfancierwords,buttheyweren'tnecessarilyusedcorrectlyanddidn'tquiteconnectwithotherwords.Asforgrammar,therewereafewmistakesinpunctuation,butmosterrorswereinthesentenceitself.

　　Thatsentenceinbracketscanbetakenout,youdon'treallyneedit.

2020-02-26 01:15:35

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