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  【帮我看下有没有什么错误!wemustbecarefultomakefriends.Whenwechatwithsomeoneonline,wecan'ttellourrealinformationtohim.Second,whenwe'reindanger,weshouldaskpoliceforhelp.Third,whenwegotoastrangeplaceforapicni】

  帮我看下有没有什么错误!

  wemustbecarefultomakefriends.Whenwechatwithsomeoneonline,wecan'ttellourrealinformationtohim.Second,whenwe'reindanger,weshouldaskpoliceforhelp.Third,whenwegotoastrangeplaceforapicnic,weshouldeatsafefood.Andifweeatsomethingbadfoodandfeelterrible,wemustgotoahospitalandletadoctorcheck.Fourth,whenweplaysports,weshouldrelaxforalittlewhiletostopusfromfallingill.Finally,Ihopethatwecanfeelwelleveryday!

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2020-02-2015:49
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  修改:wemustbecarefultomakefriends.First,whenwechatwithsomeoneonline,wecan'ttellourrealinformationtohim.Second,whenwe'reindanger,weshouldaskpoliceforhelp.Third,whenwegotoastrangeplaceforapicnic,weshouldeatsafefood.Andifweeatsomebadfoodandfeelsick,wemustgotohospitalandletadoctorcheck.Fourth,whenweplaysports,weshouldrelaxforalittlewhiletopreventusfromfallingill.Finally,Ihopethatwecanfeelwelleveryday!

  基本上没有问题,就是修改了一些词语,有问题可以追问.

2020-02-20 15:52:42
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