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　　【去面试外贸采购,要集体用英语做自我介绍,我刚刚写了一份草稿,各位牛人请提一些修改建议,Goodmorning,everyone~Ireallygotshockedbyyoubecauseallofyouaresoamazing,vigorousandfriendly,andIamgladtoknowy】

　　去面试外贸采购,要集体用英语做自我介绍,我刚刚写了一份草稿,各位牛人请提一些修改建议,

　　Goodmorning,everyone~

　　Ireallygotshockedbyyoubecauseallofyouaresoamazing,vigorousandfriendly,andIamgladtoknowyouall!

　　NowIamverypleasedtohavethehonortointroducemyselftous.

　　MynameisChris,whograduatedfromBeihangUniversitylastyear.MymajorisElectronicEngineering,whichisimportantexperienceforworkinginelectroniccomponentsfield.

　　Asaforeigntradesalesperson,Ihaveacquiredone-yearvaluableexperiencefrommylastcorporationAVC,whichisoneofthe

　　largestsystemthermalsolutionsuppliersintheworld,soitwouldbeeasyandexcitingformetonegotiatewithforeignsuppliersinEnglish.

　　Well,inmysparetime,Ioftengoroller-skating,readsomebooksorwatchNBAsportgames.

　　I’dliketobeafriendofeveryoneofyouandIlookforwardtojoiningourexcellentteam.

　　That’sall!Thankyouverymuch!

　　有没有什么该介绍的没有介绍，或者不该介绍的却介绍了？

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李恒峰

　　Goodmorning,everyone~

　　I'mgladtoknowyouallsinceyouaresoamazing,vigorousandfriendly(原句比较啰嗦,而且shock表示"震惊",用在这里不恰当)!

　　NowIamverypleasedtointroducemyselftoyou(原句比较啰嗦).

　　MynameisChris,andIgraduatedfromBeihangUniversitylastyear.MymajorwasElectronicEngineering,whichisimportantexperienceforworkingintheindustryofelectroniccomponents.

　　（下面几段写得较好,只作了少量修改）

　　Asaforeigntradesalesperson,Ihaveacquiredone-yearvaluableexperiencefrommylastcorporationAVC,whichisoneofthe

　　largestsystemthermalsolutionsuppliersintheworld,soitwouldbeeasyandexcitingformetonegotiatewithforeignsuppliersinEnglish.

　　Well,inmysparetime,Ioftengoroller-skating,readsomebooksorwatchNBAgames.

　　I’dliketobeafriendwithyouallandIlookforwardtojoiningourexcellentteam.

　　That’sall!Thankyouverymuch!

　　（最后,祝面试顺利!）