研究生面试英语自我介绍,已完成,求修改!采用者另加50分!如题,希望能改正：1.错误的地方2.不够生动的地方.习惯用法什么的.——————————————————————Goodmorning,myrespe

　　研究生面试英语自我介绍,已完成,求修改!采用者另加50分!

　　如题,希望能改正：

　　1.错误的地方

　　2.不够生动的地方.习惯用法什么的.

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　　Goodmorning,myrespectedprofessors!Itismyhonortobehereforyourinterview.First,letmeintroducemyselftoyou.MynameisZhangjing,22yearsold,IcomefromLuoyangcity,itisafamoustouristcity.IwillfinishmyundergraduateeducationinLuoyangInstituteofTechnologythisJune.Now,IamdoingmybesttoobtainingachancetoattendNanjingUniversityofArchitectureandTechnology.

　　Inthepast4years,mostmytimehasbeenspentonstudyorcampusactivities.ButIalsousedvacationtimetosomedecoratingcompaniesdoinginternships.IamahardworkingstudentespeciallydothethingIaminterestedin.Iwilltrymybesttofinishitnomatterhowdifficultitis.WhenIwassophomore,IfoundEnvironmentalArtDesignveryinteresting,soIlearneditveryhard.Atthattime,themaindirectionisdoingsomethingabouttheinteriordesign.Suchascommercialspace,homedecorationandsoon.

　　Astomycharacters,Idon’twanttouseanybeautifulwordtopraisemyself.Justlikemyfather,Istrivetobeanhonest,uprightandmodestman.Inmysparetime,Ilikefootball,tabletennisandChinesechess.AlsoEnglishsongsandmoviesaremyfavorite.

　　‘Lifeislikeaboxofchocolates.Youneverknowwhatyou'regonnaget’.However,IalwaysbelieveIshouldcherishmytime,andsenseanychangeforself-development,Itriedtohaveagoodprospect.

　　Diligenceisthemotherofsuccess,Efficiencyistheonlyway.

　　Thatisallformyself-introduction,Thankyouforgivingmethisopportunity!Thankyou!