AFunday

　　ItwasasunnyMonday.Iwentouttoplaywithmyfriend---Jane.Iliketoplaywithher,becausesheisastronggirl.Werodebikestoabeautifulgarden.theseweresomerosesandsomelilies.Childrenliketoplayinthere.Wedidlotsofthingsthere.Sometimeswesatonthegrasssidebyside,closingtheeyesandquietlyandhearingthebirdsingsongs.Soonwerodethebikesquickly.SuddenlyJanestopped.“What’sthematter?”Iaskedher,”Mybikeisbroken”shesaid,“Oh,it’stoobad!”Isaid,“Don’tworry.”Shesaid.Shefoldedherbike,andputitonmybike,“Let’sgotomendmybike!”Wewenttoashoptomendit.ThenherbikewasOk.Webecamehappyagain.

　　Thisisanfunday.Wehadagoodtimetogether!

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