作业君找到的参考例题:【问题】:英语作文MyStory80词左右【答案】:mynameissongyonghao,iam22yearsold.icomefromluoyang,averybeautifulaicentcity.myundergratuadeperiodwillbeaccomplishedinchanganuniversityinjuly,2004;andnow,iamtryingmybestforobtainingakeytotongjiuniversity.generallyspeaking,iamahardworkingstudentespeciallydothethingiaminterestedin.iwilltrymybesttofinishitnomatterhowdifficultitis.wheniwassophomore,ifoundwebdesignveryinteresting,soilearneditveryhard.toweaverahomepageformyself,istayedwithmypesonelcomputerforhalfamonth.,andiamthefirstoneinmyclasswhoownhishomepage.forthermore,iamapersonwithgreatperserverence.duringthedayspreparingforthefirstexamination,iinsistonrunningeveryday,nomatterwhattheweatherwaslike.andjustowningtothis,icouldconcentrateonmystudyandsucceededintheend.well,inmysparetime,ilikebasketball,tennisandchinesechess.alsoenglishismyfavorate.ioftengotoenglishcornertopractisemyoralenglishoneverythursday,andwritecompositionstoimprovemywittenability.butiknowmyenglishisnotgoodenough,iwillcontinuestudying.Thatismystory

　　DIYbreakfastIalwaysgetupearlyinthemorning.Iusuallyhavemybreakfastathalfpastsix.Ileavehomehalfanhourlater.I'mneverlateforschool.Therearemanyclassesinthemorning.Ataquarterpasttwelve,Ihavelunch.Sometimes,I'mnotsobusyintheafternoon.AfterschoolIhavedinnerwithmyfamily.AfterIfinishmyhomeworkIoftenplaysomegameswithmyfamily.OnlythenwillItorelax.Althoughthisisabusyday,butIfeelfullandsatisfied亲，对我的回答满意的话，就给个好评吧。如果还有不清楚的地方，可以跟我继续交流哦。

　　是关于父母生日之类的

　　你要早说啊

　　到底要求是什么！？

　　父母生日快来了我要为他准备生日礼物之类的

　　Todayismyfather’sbirthday,buthedoesn’tcelebrateit.It’sbecausehemustworktoday.Isayhappybirthdaytohiminthemorning.AndIprepareabirthdaycardforhim,whichIdrawitbymyself.Iwrote“Happybirthdaytoyou,mydeardaddy.Bestwishesfromyourdeardaughter.Iloveyou.”WhenIgaveittohim,hewassohappyandsmiledtome.Atnight,wehaveadeliciousdinnerwhichismyfather’sfavoritedishescookedbymymother.Shesaysit’sherbirthdaygifttomyfather.Ithinkit’senoughbecauseweallenjoythedinner.MyfathersaysthatmymotherandIgivehimahappyandbelovedbirthday.

　　亲，对我的回答满意的话，就给个好评吧。如果还有不清楚的地方，可以跟我继续交流哦。

　　是关于父母生日之类的

　　你要早说啊

　　到底要求是什么！？

　　父母生日快来了我要为他准备生日礼物之类的

　　Todayismyfather’sbirthday,buthedoesn’tcelebrateit.It’sbecausehemustworktoday.Isayhappybirthdaytohiminthemorning.AndIprepareabirthdaycardforhim,whichIdrawitbymyself.Iwrote“Happybirthdaytoyou,mydeardaddy.Bestwishesfromyourdeardaughter.Iloveyou.”WhenIgaveittohim,hewassohappyandsmiledtome.Atnight,wehaveadeliciousdinnerwhichismyfather’sfavoritedishescookedbymymother.Shesaysit’sherbirthdaygifttomyfather.Ithinkit’senoughbecauseweallenjoythedinner.MyfathersaysthatmymotherandIgivehimahappyandbelovedbirthday.