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　　写了篇英语作文~NewYeariscoming.EveryonehaslotsofNewyear’sresolutions.IaskedmyfriendsabouttheirNewYear’sresolutions.Lucyisagoodstudent.Shealwaysgetsgoodgrades.ButshewantstodobetterinChinese.Sheisgoingtota

　　写了篇英语作文~

　　NewYeariscoming.EveryonehaslotsofNewyear’sresolutions.IaskedmyfriendsabouttheirNewYear’sresolutions.Lucyisagoodstudent.Shealwaysgetsgoodgrades.ButshewantstodobetterinChinese.SheisgoingtotakeChineselessonseverySunday.Andsheisalittlebitheavy.Sosheisgoingtoeatmorevegetablesanddomoreexercisetokeepfit.Vickyisasmartgirl.ShedoeswellinEnglish.Nextyear,sheisgoingtolearnaforeignlauguage.SheisgoingtohaveFenchclasseseverymonth.Sheisgoodatplayingthepiano.Shereallylovemusicandsheisgoingtolearntheguitar.Shewantstobeamusicianwhenshegrowsup.Ihopethattheirdreamscometrue.

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　　明天要课前演讲,麻烦看下有没有写错的地方~或者修改下~

　　NewYear’sdayiscoming.EveryonehaslotsofNewyear’sresolutions.IaskedmyfriendsabouttheirNewYear’sresolutions.Lucyisagoodstudent.Shealwaysgetsgoodgradesatschool.ButshewantstodobetterinChinese.SheisgoingtotakeChineselessonseverySunday.Sheisgoingtobeareporterwhenshegrowsup.Sheisalittlebitheavy.Soshewilleatmorevegetablesanddomoreexercisetokeepfit.Vickyisasmartgirl.ShedoeswellinEnglish.Nextyear,sheplanstolearnaforeignlauguage.SheisgoingtohaveFenchclasseseverymonth.Sheisgoodatplayingthepiano,too.Shereallylovemusicandsheisgoingtolearntheguitar.Ihopethattheirdreamscometrue.修改版~

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2020-02-0702:06

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候俊才

　　不错,但isgoingto用得太多,可改用一些其它生字,如will,intend,plan,want.等

　　NewYear’sdayiscoming.EveryonehaslotsofNewyear’sresolutions.IaskedmyfriendsabouttheirNewYear’sresolutions.Lucyisagoodstudent.Shealwaysgetsgoodgradesatschool.ButshewantstodobetterinChinese.SheisgoingtotakeChinesecourseseverySunday.Herdreamisbeareporterwhenshegrowsup.Sheisalittlebitfat.Sosheintendtoeatmorevegetablesanddomoreexercisetokeepfit.Vickyisasmartgirl.ShedoeswellinEnglish.Nextyear,shewantstolearnaforeignlauguage.Frenchisherfirstchoice.Sheisgoodatplayingthepiano,too.Shereallylovemusicandsheisgoingtolearntheguitartoo.Ihopealltheirdreamscometrue.