Goodafternoon,everyone,
Thenationalstudentsportsprogram,wagedbytheMinistryofEducationandaimedatimprovingstudentshealth,washeldfrom10:00a.m.~11:00a.m.onApril29,2007inmanyprimaryandmiddleschoolsalloverChina.Almost11millionstudentsinJiangsuprovinceparticipatedinthisprogram.
TheMinistryofEducationadvocatesthatwedoexercisesforonehouradayandcanworkhealthilyfor50years.Ourwholelifewillbeveryenjoyable.
Inmyopinion,weseniorhighschoolstudentsshoulddoexercisesforonehouradayeventhoughoursparetimeislimited.Healthisabasicconditionforourstudy.Ifwedidnotdoexercises,wewouldn’tbeabletogetgoodstudyrecords.Soeveryoneofyou,jointheprogramnow!
Thankyou!
结构要明晰,使用句式要熟练而准确。本文可以分三段,前两段叙述,后一段发表观点。在句式使用上,
范文好词1.wagev.发动2.aimv.瞄准3.advocatev.提倡
好句1.TheMinistryofEducationadvocatesthatwedoexercisesforonehouradayandcanworkhealthilyfor50years.
教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动,能够健康地活50年。
评析:advocate,其后接虚拟语气,可以省略情态动词。
2.Ifwedidnotdoexercises,wewouldn’tbeabletogetgoodstudyrecords.
如果我们不进行运动,我们的学习成绩就不会很好。
评析:虚拟语气。