【我刚刚写了篇英语作文,请各路高手帮我修改,指导我下,英语作文如下：SafetyTheSpringFestivaliscomingsoon,soweshouldcareaboutPersonalsafety.Firstly,whenwegoout,weshouldpayattentiontotrafficsafety.Beforewe】

　　我刚刚写了篇英语作文,请各路高手帮我修改,指导我下,英语作文如下：

　　Safety

　　TheSpringFestivaliscomingsoon,soweshouldcareaboutPersonalsafety.

　　Firstly,whenwegoout,weshouldpayattentiontotrafficsafety.Beforewecrosstheraod,weshouldobeythetrafficrules,orelsethatisagainsttherules.

　　Secondly,whenwestayathome,wealsoshouldkeepsafe.Ifweareathomealone,weshouldnotusefire.becausewecanbehurtbyfire.Fireisdangerous.butElectricityismoredangerous.weshoulduseelectricitycarefully.Itisdangeroustotouchthetelevisionwithwethand.

　　Ifwedoeverythingscarefully,wewillbehappyeveryday!