Iam20yearsold.MyambitionistobeaPLAman.OnereasonisthatmybrotherisasoldierinPLA.Mybrotherishandsomeandmuscline.Everytimehecomesback,Iaskhimalotofstoriesaboutthearmylife.Allthestoriesappealtome.Inaddition,Iwanttodevoteguardingourmotgerland.ThisideageneratedwhenIwas17yearsold.Iwatchedthemilitaryparadeonthe60thNationalDay.Iwasattractedtothemodernarmy.

　　Ihavegoodeye-sightandendurableenergy.Ithinkthosewillhelpmefufillmydreamoftakingthearmy.

　　翻译：

　　我20岁.我的志向是当兵.一个原因是我哥是解放军,他孔武有力.他每次给我讲军旅生活.它们吸引了我.另一个原因是我在17岁那年看了国庆六十周年阅兵.被现代化军队吸引了.

　　我视力好,精力旺盛,这是我当兵的优势.

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