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　　英语短文有什么语病帮我改改?Sincescienceisdevelopingquickly,almosteveryfamilyinChinahaveleastoneTV.ItiseasytogetinformationbywatchingTV.ButIlisteningtotheradiomorethanwatchingTV.Actuallylistentotheradiois

　　英语短文有什么语病帮我改改?

　　Sincescienceisdevelopingquickly,almosteveryfamilyinChinahaveleastoneTV.ItiseasytogetinformationbywatchingTV.ButIlisteningtotheradiomorethanwatchingTV.Actuallylistentotheradioisnotlikelytobereplacedbytelevision.Onecanlistentotheradiowhilewaitingabusordosomeotherthings,butprobablyhewon'twatchTVinthemeantime.Iusuallylistentotheradiobymymobilephone,Icantakethemanywherebutit'simpossibletobringatelevisioneverywhere.Thoughithasonlygotabout10channels,Ifeelinterestedinit.Inaword,bothradioandTVcanprovidedifferentkingsofpleasure.

　　我是初中生,这篇作文感觉问题很多..可能还有点不必要的句子,希望大家耐心帮我改改,

　　有个them打错了是it~

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2020-01-2912:37

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刘天武

　　Sincescienceisdevelopingquickly,almosteveryfamilyinChina(owns)(at)leastoneTV.(Although)itiseasytogetinformationbywatchingTV,I(preferlistening)totheradio.(Infact,theradio)isnotlikelytobereplacedbytelevision.Onecanlistentotheradiowhilewaiting(forthe)busorwhile(doing)otherthings,buthecannotwatchTVin(thesesituations).Iusuallylistentotheradio(on)my(cellphone),(and)Icantake(it)anywhere(withme).(Incontrast,)it'simpossibletobringatelevisioneverywhere.Though(myradioonlyhas)about10channels,I(finditinteresting).In(summary),bothradioandTVcanprovidedifferentkindsofpleasure.

　　改过的地方用括号标出来了.^^