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  【帮我看看这篇英语文章有什么问题,快DearLiuYun,Hi!IamXuXinyi.Anneismyenglishname.Iamhappytohaveanewpenpal.IliveinNingbowithmymomanddad,Ningboisabeautifulcity.WelcometoNingbo!Idon'thaveasisterorbrother】

  帮我看看这篇英语文章有什么问题,快

  DearLiuYun,

  Hi!IamXuXinyi.Anneismyenglishname.Iamhappytohaveanewpenpal.IliveinNingbowithmymomanddad,Ningboisabeautifulcity.WelcometoNingbo!Idon'thaveasisterorbrother,butIhopetohaveone.Ihaveasmallfamily,butitiscoziness.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily--father,motherandme.Mymotherisateacher.Sheworksinschool.Sheisslightlyfat,butsheisveryoptimistic.Sheoftensay:"laughandbefat."Shelikeslisteningtomusic.Andmyfatherisaboss.Heisverytallandthin.Ilovemyfather,becauseItakeafterone'sfather.Helikesbasketballverymuch,heisaloyalfans.Ilikeridingmybikeanddrewingpictures.Whataboutyou?

  我都是自己写的,请各位英语好点的快点看看,帮我挑挑下,不好的句子删掉,有语病改掉,还可以适当的加些句子的,快,

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2020-01-2618:46
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  DearLiuYun,Hi!IamXuXinyi.MyEnglishnameisAnne.Iamgladtohaveanewpenpal.IliveinNingbowhichisabeautifulcityandwelcometoNingbo!IhavenosisterorbrotherthoughIhopeso.Myf...

2020-01-26 18:50:51
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