本人明年即将考研,请各位高手看看我写的这篇作文有什么问题,能得多少分?这是今年的考研原题,谢谢!Dearpresident,I,asaseniorstudentofouruniversity,amwritingtoexpressinthislettermydeepestconcernabout

　　本人明年即将考研,请各位高手看看我写的这篇作文有什么问题,能得多少分?这是今年的考研原题,谢谢!

　　Dearpresident,

　　I,asaseniorstudentofouruniversity,amwritingtoexpressinthislettermydeepestconcernabouttheimprovementofstudent’sphysicalconditionandconveymyproposalaboutit.

　　Firstofall,itiswellknownthatjogginginthemorningisaeffectivewaytomakeourphysicalconditionbetter.Butthereexistacommonphenomenonthatfewstudentshavethishabit.Isuggestthatyoucouldmakeadisciplinethateveryoneshouldjoginthemorningat7:30—8:00am.Lastbutnotleast,lackingofadequateplacemaybeisamainfactorthatwecan’tusuallyplaybasketball.Ifmorespacecouldbeexpandedtobuildmorebasketballcourt,thereisnodoubtthattherewillbealotofstudentsplayingbasketball.

　　ThankyoufortakingtimereadingmyletterandIhopethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!

　　YoursSincerely,

　　LiMing