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  请大家帮我看看我写的这个短文里面有哪些错误Today,Iwanttotellyouatruestory.Ithappened3yearsago.Atmidnight,IwassurfingontheInternet.Aftertime,Iwasalittletired.soIwenttobed.Ihadjustlaindown,Isawagrea

  请大家帮我看看我写的这个短文里面有哪些错误

  Today,Iwanttotellyouatruestory.Ithappened3yearsago.Atmidnight,IwassurfingontheInternet.Aftertime,Iwasalittletired.soIwenttobed.Ihadjustlaindown,Isawagreatmanyoflinesthatlookedlikeblackandwhiteonthetopwall.Itlookedlikeabadtelevision.Justthen,Ifound,Icouldn'tmoved.Itwasveryterrible.

  Myheartwasveryfearasapoorchild.Butafteramoment,Icouldmoved.Iknew.Thiswas"ghostburden"thatpeopleoftendiscussion.

  大意是:今天,我想跟你讲一个真实的故事,它发生在3年前,半夜的时候我正在上网,过了一会,我感觉有点累,我去了床上,我刚刚躺下,我看到了房顶有很多黑色和白色的线条,它看起来像一个坏掉的电视机,就在这时,我发现我不能动了,这太糟糕了,我感觉我就像一个可怜的小孩,但是过了一会,我发现我能动了,我知道了,这就是人们经常讨论的鬼压身.

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2020-01-2603:30
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  同学,这是我翻译的,你对照看看.Today,I'dliketotellyouatruestory,ithappenedinthreeyearsago,inthemiddleofthenightIwassurfingtheInternet,afterawhile,Ifeelalittletired,Iwentto...

2020-01-26 03:33:17
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