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  【请帮我修改作文的语法错误Todaywasmyfather'sbirthday.Idecidedtogivehimasurprise,soIwenttotheshopandboughtagift.Then,Iwenthomebysubwaytrain.Hadbeenthingabouthowhappyhewaswhenhereceivedthegift,Iwassoexci】

  请帮我修改作文的语法错误

  Todaywasmyfather'sbirthday.Idecidedtogivehimasurprise,soIwenttotheshopandboughtagift.Then,Iwenthomebysubwaytrain.Hadbeenthingabouthowhappyhewaswhenhereceivedthegift,IwassoexcitedthatIcanhardlysatonmyseatsilently.Atthenextstop,gotonagrandma,holdingtwobigbagsinherhands.Shelookedverytired.IbeganthinkingtomyselfwhetherIshouldgivemyseattoher.Thenaboutoneminutespassed,Istoodupandgavemyseattoher."Thankyou!"shesaid.WhenIheardthesewords,Ifeltveryhappy.IknowIhaddonetherightthing.Todaywasagreatday!

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2020-01-2407:31
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  Todaywasmyfather'sbirthday.Todayismyfather'sbirthday.今天是你父亲的生日,这里没必要用过去时.soIwenttotheshopandboughtagift.后面可以加forhim也可以不加.Hadbeenthingabouthowhappyhe...

2020-01-24 07:35:59
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