托福作文求修改+估分（09年的一道题）Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Ajobwithmorevacationtimeisbetterthanajobwithhighsalarybutlessvacationtime.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropin

　　托福作文求修改+估分（09年的一道题）

　　Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Ajobwithmorevacationtimeisbetterthanajobwithhighsalarybutlessvacationtime.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.

　　Whenitcomestotheissueofwhetherweshouldchooseajobwithmorefreetimeorwithhighersalary,mostpeoplemayhaveanopinionthatweneedtoearnasmuchmoneyaswecouldinordertomakeourlivesbetter.However,thisideaissomewhatnotverypractical.Thereisnodoubtthatthosewhohaveawell-paidjobcanalwaysenjoymoreintheirmateriallives,butmorevacationtimecanprovidepeoplemoreopportunitiestoenjoytheirmentallives.

　　Firstofall,peoplecanhavethechancestoexperiencealotofdifferentthingsattheirvacationtime.Anincreasingnumberofpeoplebegintohaveadistanttripintheirvacations.Forinstance,IwouldliketovisitTibet,aprovincewithaspectacularlandscapeinChina,ifIhaveenoughtimetodosoduringmyholidays.Thesnowmountains,theblueskyandthesurgeoftheYangziriverinthatareaindeedappealtomealot.Ibelievethatwillbeanunforgettableandspecialexperienceformetohaveaclosecontactwiththenatureandlearnmoreaboutthelocalcultureandhistoryofthatregion,whichcanbenefitmebyexpandingmyhorizonsandknowledge.

　　Inaddition,thereisagrowingawareabouthowimportantitistogetfull-relaxedbeforewegobacktowork.Atworkdays,peoplecanalwayshardlyfindenoughtimetodosomesportstorelaxthemselves,buttheyareabletodosoinvacationtime.Forexample,IhaveafriendcalledLilywhohasajobwitha3-monthvacationeveryyear.Sheisverysatisfiedaboutthisvacationtimeeventhoughshecannotgetahighersalarybecauseshecanspend2hoursadaypracticingtennisathersparetime,whichmakesherbodyhealthierandhermoodmorerelaxable.Besidesdoingsports,listeningtomusic,watchingmoviesordoingsomeotherthingsareallgoodformsofrelaxation.Thosecanrefreshourmindfromlong-timebrainworksothatwecanworkevenmoreefficientlyandactivelyafterthevacations.

　　Finally,anotherequallycrucialaspectisthatmoreholidaytimeareneededforustoreunitewithourfamilies.Itisundeniablethatparentsalwayswanttheirchildrentomakemoremoneytoimpro