【姐姐,您好,您能帮我在改一篇考研英语小作文吗?姐姐,这是一篇12年英语2的小作文,麻烦您在有空时帮我改一改,受累!（如果有语法错误,麻烦您帮我指出来）Directions:Supposeyouhavefoundsomethingwro】

　　姐姐,您好,您能帮我在改一篇考研英语小作文吗?

　　姐姐,这是一篇12年英语2的小作文,麻烦您在有空时帮我改一改,受累!（如果有语法错误,麻烦您帮我指出来）

　　Directions:

　　Supposeyouhavefoundsomethingwrongwiththeelectronicdictionarythatyoubroughtfromanonlinestoretheotherday.Writeanemailtothecustomerservicecenterto

　　1.makeacomplaint,and

　　2.demandapromptsolution

　　Dearsirormadam,

　　Iamacustomerwhoregularlybuysomethingfromyouronlinestore,Iamcompletelydisappointedtofindthattheserviceyouprovideisfarfromsatisfactory.

　　IamreferringtothisthingthatIjustboughtanelectronicdictionaryfromyouronlinestorelastweek,buttherearesomeproblemswithit.Firstly,thedictionaryisbrokenwhenIreceivedit.Secondly,thebatteryneedschargingafteronlytwohoursofuse.

　　Therefore,somethingmustbedonetosolvetheproblems,becausetheybringmemuchtroubleinmystudy.Youcaneithercompensatemeatareasonablepriceoralternativelysendmeanewmachinebyexpressmail.Lastly,pleasetellmewhichsolutionyoupreferatyouearliestconvenience.

　　Yourssincerely,

　　LiMing