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　　【帮忙看一下这篇英语作文写得有没有不对的地方?Manystudetsgettiredbecausetheyhavetodotoomuchhomework.Andthethavenotimetoodoexercise,so,theycan'tgetgoodgrades,andtheyarenotstrong.Ithinkitisveryimportant】

　　帮忙看一下这篇英语作文写得有没有不对的地方?

　　Manystudetsgettiredbecausetheyhavetodotoomuchhomework.Andthethavenotimetoodoexercise,so,theycan'tgetgoodgrades,andtheyarenotstrong.Ithinkitisveryimportanttostayhealthy,itdependsonhowoftenyoudoexercise.Ourschoolhasmanykindsofsportslikebasketball,volleyballandsoccer.Weoftenplaysportsinschool.WecanexerciseinP.Eclass.Ithinkitisgoodforourhealth.Ithelpsmetookeephealthy.Ihopewecanhavealotmoretimetodosports.

　　这篇作文是考试时候写的,老师也没仔细改,想知道有没有写错的地方,谁能帮帮啦?

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2020-01-2321:04

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　　Manystudetsgettiredbecausetheyhavetodotoomuchhomework.Andthet（拼错了they）havenotimetoo(改为to)doexercise,(这儿算一句结束.)so(大写So,开始另一句),(删掉这个逗号)theycan'tgetgood（改为high）grades,andtheyarenotstrong.Ithinkitisveryimportanttostayhealthy,it（这儿最好重新开始另一句.It）dependsonhowoftenyoudoexercise.Ourschoolhasmanykindsofsports(运动项目不能这么说,建议改为sportsequipment运动器材,因为你后面的球都算器材)like（suchas）basketball,volleyballandsoccer.Weoftenplaysports(做运动不能这么说,改成doingexercise)inschool.Wecan（要加一个do在这儿）exerciseinP.Eclass.Ithinkitisgoodforourhealth.Ithelpsmetoo(又写错to)keephealthy.Ihopewecanhavealot(删掉)moretimetodosports.