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　　英语作文,帮我看看有哪些地方错了假如我是树,我们想对人们说些什么题目whatwetreeswanttosayhello,every!Youareourgoodfriend!iloveyouverymuch!but,whydoyoucutusdown?youknow,wecanprotecttheenvironment.

　　英语作文,帮我看看有哪些地方错了

　　假如我是树,我们想对人们说些什么

　　题目whatwetreeswanttosay

　　hello,every!Youareourgoodfriend!iloveyouverymuch!but,whydoyoucutusdown?youknow,wecanprotecttheenvironment.forinstancewecanmakefrenshairandtakeinCO2stopthewaterfrombreakingyourhouseandsoon.soitisnecessaryforyoutoprotectus.whatshouldyoudo?youshouldplantmoretrees.youmustn'tcutdownthetrees.youshouldwashtreesontime.ibelieveyoucandothat.let'stoprotecttheenvironment

　　错误的单词和语句的毛病都帮我找出来.作文满分15看看我能拿多少

　　非常感谢!

　　没时间才不大写的，而其那个every是我漏掉的。。--

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　　hello,every(everyone)!Youareourgoodfriend(s)!iloveyouverymuch!but,whydoyoucutusdown?youknow,wecanprotecttheenvironment.forinstancewecanmakefrensh(fresh)airandtakeinCO2stopthewaterfrombreakingyourhouseandsoon.soitisnecessaryforyoutoprotectus.whatshouldyoudoyoushouldplantmoretrees.youmustn'tcutdownthetrees.youshouldwash(water)treesontime.ibelieveyoucandothat.let'stoprotecttheenvironment

　　还有注意标点符号,和开头要大写