英语短文改错,修改语法错误和拼写,各种错误,并指出修改建议和-查字典问答网
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  英语短文改错,修改语法错误和拼写,各种错误,并指出修改建议和修改理由.Youcancompareyourselfwithothers.Butyoucannotcompareotherswithothers.Ihatethiskindofperson.idohate!Howfoolishitis!Ifyouarereally

  英语短文改错,修改语法错误和拼写,各种错误,并指出修改建议和修改理由.

  Youcancompareyourselfwithothers.Butyoucannotcompareotherswithothers.Ihatethiskindofperson.idohate!Howfoolishitis!Ifyouarereallyexcellentandgoodenough,youcandoit,justdoit.Ifnot,neverdoanythingthatothersfeeluncomfortableandawkward.Icanneverstandit.

  Everyonehasitsownadvantagesanddisadvantages.Ifyoudoitlikethis,youmayhurtsomeone,likeme.sorry.Iamnotstrongenoughtoacceptwhatyoudid.Ithinkiamgoingtobemad.Allwasmadebyyouwhoneverthinkofothers,whoalwaysspeakandbehavewithoutthinking,neverthroughmind.

  Haveyoueverthoughtthatoncesomeoneishurtdeeply,hisheartwillfalldowntothelowestplacenamed"sad"or"alone".Idaresay,youarenotauptostandardone.Feelingonlyimyselfsathere,nowords,nosmile,onlysadness,onlyatelevision,onlyacomputerleftbesideme.

  Atthattime,iwantedtodigaholetogetinto.Asmyfacegotred,ifeltmyselflikedahardstone.Thereisneveranyoneelsehasevergonethrough.

  Afterhervoice,myspiritsweregettinglowerandlower.Thatthesefeelingsihadwereseldomownedbycommonpeople,onlythiskindofspecialman,likeme.Iwillneverforgettheseunforgettenableexperiences.Itwasnotthefirsttimethatyoudiditlikethis.Youhavedonethesamethingforsomanytimes.Ifihaveachancethatgoingabroad,leavingtheplacewhereineverbelong,leavingthesepeoplewhoneverthinkofme,iamwillingtogiveupmyall,evenwhatihaveowned.Iamwillingto...

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  正文汉语意思太明显,英语不地道.从语法角度并无大碍.但通篇不舒服.reallyexcellentandgoodenough,really,excellent不可同用neverdoanythingthat这儿加willmakesothersfeel.All"these"wasmadebyyou,...

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