(题目ThetriptotheGreatWall)IwenttoclimbtheGreatWallwithmyparentsthissummervacation.I’mgladtoknowyou’reinterestedinthistrip.I’lltellyouasmuchaspossiblenow.

　　TheGreatWallisoneofthegreatestwondersoftheworld.Itattractsthousandsoftouristsbothathomeandabroadeveryday.Itrunsacrossthemountains,likeadragon.

　　Whenwegottherewewereveryexcitedthatwebegantoclimbimmediately.Thestepssometimeswereveryflat,butsometimesverysteep.Aftertwohoursofclimbing,wegottothetopatlast.Ienjoyedthebeautyofthemountainsandtookalotofphotos.Ifeltreallyproudandthoughtofthefamoussaying:HewhohasneverbeentotheGreatWallisnotatrueman.

　　IfyoucometoChina,I’llbegladtotakeyoutotheGreatWallsothatyoucanappreciatethebeautifulsceneryoftheGreatWall.

　　语法无错,绝对是范文.