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  【请各位英语达人帮我改下作文,超急!马上考研!DearLiMing,IamwritingthislettertocongratulateyouonyourbeingsuccessfullyadmittedtoPekingUniversity.Yourhardworkhaspaidoffandweareallsoproudofyou.Howtogetprepa】

  请各位英语达人帮我改下作文,超急!马上考研!

  DearLiMing,

  IamwritingthislettertocongratulateyouonyourbeingsuccessfullyadmittedtoPekingUniversity.Yourhardworkhaspaidoffandweareallsoproudofyou.

  Howtogetpreparedforyouruniversitylife?Iamsohappytogiveyousomesuggestionsasfollows.First,beingindependentofparentsinlifeandemotion.Second,takingexerciseeveryday.Besides,travelingwithyourclassmatesduringthesemonths.YunnanandHangzhouaregreatchoices.Itwillbeanunforgettablememory(表回忆时,可数)inyourwholelife.

  CongratulateyouagainandIwishyouhaveacolorfullifeinuniversity.

  Sincerely,

  ZhangWei

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2020-01-2311:00
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  1.paidoff可以考虑改为works,感觉payoff一般指金钱收益上的

  2.第二段第一句,如果要表达如何安排你的大学生活,那你这句不太正确.可以Howtohaveyouruniversitylifewellprepared?或者What'syourplantohaveawonderfulunidersitylife?

  3.independentof应该改为independentfrom表示从.独立起来.

  4.最后一段,i可以去掉,have也可以去掉,wishyoua.如果要有have,改为Hopeyouhavea.

  congratulateyouagain也可以换成congratulationstoyouagain...

2020-01-23 11:01:32
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