求高手改一下我的六级英语作文.OntheImportantofaNameEverybodyhasaname.What’smore,alotofattentionisbeingdrawntoitandpeople’sideasarevarious.Ontheonehand,somepeopleholdtheviewthatthenameisveryimportant

　　求高手改一下我的六级英语作文.

　　OntheImportantofaName

　　Everybodyhasaname.What’smore,alotofattentionisbeingdrawntoitandpeople’sideasarevarious.

　　Ontheonehand,somepeopleholdtheviewthatthenameisveryimportant.Firstofall,thenamewillbethefirstimpactwhichyougivetoyournewfriend.Asweknowthefirstimpactisveryimportantinsomecaselikehuntingajob.Secondly,awonderfulnamecangiveyousomegoodcharacters.Forexample,amanwhocalled”LiGang”usuallyreallypowerful.Thelastbutnotleast,thenamecontaintheexpectationswhichparentsgivetothekids.

　　Ontheotherhand,agreatmanypeopleinsistthatnameisindifferent.Theymainlypointoutthatweatherapersoncanbesuccessfuldependsonhowhardheorsheworkbuthasnothingtodowithhisorhername.

　　Inmyopinion,thereshouldbesomethingrelatetothename.Butwhatwecanmostlytrustisourself.Weshouldrememberourname,andfighthard!