【初中英语作文,求老师纠正点评下~,,主要就是帮忙查看一下作文是否有语法错误.还有就是,作文是20分的满分,求老师毫不吝啬地打下分数,作文主要内容：ChinaDream&MyUniversityDream作文：Recently】

　　初中英语作文,求老师纠正点评下~,

　　,主要就是帮忙查看一下作文是否有语法错误.还有就是,作文是20分的满分,求老师毫不吝啬地打下分数,

　　作文主要内容：ChinaDream&MyUniversityDream

　　作文：

　　Recentlywehaveheldaclassmeetingon"ChinaDream&MyUniversityDream".Ibelievethatmanyclassmatesofminehaveagreatdream,andmetoo.Asthepowerofmucheasierachievingourdreamwhichisgreatest,ImakemymindtostudyharderforgoingtoPekingUniversity.Atthistime,maybeyouwanttoaskme"Whatisyourdream?"Perhapsyouwillbeamazedbymyanswer,butIhavetosaythatmyrootdreamistomakeourcountrystrongerandstronger.Pleasedon'tlaughatme,becausedreamsmustbethefirstandactionslater.I'llstudyharderatschool,readmoregoodbooksathome,andtomakemybrainrunsmorequickly.I'llplaybasketballinmysparetime.Inaword,I'lltrymybest!