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　　帮忙改改英语自我介绍,马上就比赛了!

　　Hi,everybody,mynameis***.I’m14yearsold.I’manactivegirlinmyschool.Ihavemanyhobbies,suchassinging,swimming,butmyfavouriteisEnglish.Englishbringthewonderfulfuntomylife.Perhapssomeonethinksit’sdifficulttostudywell,butIlikeit.IdreamofbeingantranslatorwhenIgrowup.Itisn’tadaydream.Iknowit’sdifficulttosucceedandIhavetodoubletoeffort.ButIwanttotry.Iwilldomybest.Ibelievethatifyoutryyourbest,everythingcanbedonewell.

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