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  【请高手来帮我改下英语作文.HowtoCopewithStressHowtoCopewithStressNowdaysthecompetitionisimmenselyintensetothepeoplewhoworkinvariedkindsofjobs.Everypersonhasthestress.Suchasthebusinessmanwhodobusinesstomak】

  请高手来帮我改下英语作文.HowtoCopewithStress

  HowtoCopewithStress

  Nowdaysthecompetitionisimmenselyintensetothepeoplewhoworkinvariedkindsofjobs.Everypersonhasthestress.Suchasthebusinessmanwhodobusinesstomakemoney.Theyoftenfindwhichisthepopulationlikebestandbuyitonthelowpricethensellitonthehighprice.Staffmembersalsohavethestress.Theywillfinishmanyassignmentsfromthebosseveryweek,andtheyhavetoworkovertimetofinishtheassignmentontime.Thestudentssufferthepressuretoo.Theyusuallykeepupstudyingatnightinordertobeadmittedthefamousuniversity.

  Everypersonhasthedifferentmethodstoreducethestress.Someguysreducethepressurethroughthedancing.Othersdrawthepicturestodiminishthestress.Andalsogardeningisagoodwaytoreducethestress.

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2020-01-2016:35
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  Suchasthebusinessmanwhodo(改为does,因为businessman是单数第三人称)

  buyitonthelowprice(改为atlowprice)

  sellitonthehighprice(改为athighprice)

  beadmitted(改为beadmittedto)

  throughthedancing.(删掉the)

  你的题目是如何应对压力,但2/3的篇幅在谈论人们有什么压力,而不是如何应对.建议你多谈谈如何应对.

2020-01-20 16:39:43
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