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  【求改英语作文.In1895,UNannouncethatitisInternationalVolunteersDayon12.5everyyear.So,itisnecessaryforustoknowwhatisvolunteer.Thevolunteeristhatapersondosomethingforanotherwhoneedhelp.Ofcourse,wesupportthemfor】

  求改英语作文.

  In1895,UNannouncethatitisInternationalVolunteersDayon12.5everyyear.

  So,itisnecessaryforustoknowwhatisvolunteer.Thevolunteeristhatapersondosomethingforanotherwhoneedhelp.Ofcourse,wesupportthemforfree.Briefly,Weshouldbehelpfultopeople.

  Now,weneedtoknowsomethingaboutthespiritofvolunteer`ssever.First,theyshouldhaveskillandwillingtohelppeople.Second,wemustbehonestandgoodness.Lastbutnotleastthespiritiswillingtopay.

  Inmyopinion,weneedtoencouragemorepeopletoparticipateinit.One,weneedtoestablishanorganizationtoattractmorepeople.Two,weneedtoholdanactivitytotellmorepeoplethereasonwhyweneedtohelpsomepeople.

  Directions:

  Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOnVolunteering.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180andbaseyourcompositiononthefollowinginstructions(giveninChinese):

  联合国在1985年宣布每年的12月5日为国际自愿服务者日(InternationalVolunteersDay)。

  请就以下问题展开阐述:

  志愿者服务的精神是什么?

  你认为我们需要在中国提倡和鼓励自愿服务吗?如果需要的话,我们应如何提倡和鼓励自愿服务?

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2020-01-2013:58
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雷隆盛

  In1895,UNannouncedthatitisInternationalVolunteersDayon12.5(12thofMayor5thofDecember?)everyyear.

  So,itisnecessaryforustoknowwhatisavolunteer.Avolunteerisapersonwhodoessomethingforanotherwhoneedhelpwithoutrewardinmind.Weshouldbehelpfultoothers.

  Now,weneedtoknowsomethingaboutthetheminsetofavolunteer.First,heshouldhavetheskillandthewillingnesstohelpothers.Second,hemustbehonestandproactive.Lastbutnotleastthespiritiswillingtopayintermofmonetoryortime.

  Inmyopinion,weneedtoencouragemorepeopletoparticipateinvoluntorywork.Wecanestablishanorganizationtoattractmorepeople.Wecanalsoholdactivitiestotellmorepeopleaboutthereasonwhytheyneedtohelpothers.

  ItriedmybesttocorrectyoursentencesbutIneedtochangesomuchthatIworriedthatIhadchangedallyourviews.Yourwrittenessayisbelowstandard.Itissohardtocorrectwithoutdistortingthewholeessay!

2020-01-20 13:59:21
刘启新

  我把作文要求写在了上边,能不能帮我详细改一下,谢谢,错的用括号标出。

2020-01-20 14:04:04
雷隆盛

  已改啦。

2020-01-20 14:06:08
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