【今年的大学英语四级作文onlineshopping我想估一下分,nowadays,withtherapidoftheinternet,shoppingonlineisbecomingafasion,especiallyamongtheyoung.Ibelievethatmanyfactorscontributedtothewidespreadofonlineshopping.Fi】

　　今年的大学英语四级作文onlineshopping我想估一下分,

　　nowadays,withtherapidoftheinternet,shoppingonlineisbecomingafasion,especiallyamongtheyoung.

　　Ibelievethatmanyfactorscontributedtothewidespreadofonlineshopping.Firstly,itisconvenientforpeopletobuythegoodsandtheydon'tneedtogooutsidetoseachthegoodsinshopsonebyonesothatsavetheirtime.Secondly,thegoodssellsontheinternetischeaperthaninshops,itcansavetheirmuchmoney.However,shoppingonlinecanalsobepotentiallydangerious.sincethebuyerandthesellerdonotneedtodealwithface-to-face,thequalityofthegoodscan'tbeguaranteed,andthegoodsmaybedamagedduringthedelively.

　　Frommypiontofview,shoppingonlineisatrendandweshouldnotbeprohibited.Butweshouldbecarefulwhileusingitandthegovernmentshouldbetakesomemeasuresmakeitperfect.

　　顺便帮我看一下这个作文的语法什么的问题,我英语基础不够好